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What pleases Christopher
Buckley most about "Work-Ups" is that he was able to capture the feeling
of goodwill that baseball brought to him and his friends during the 1950s.
That goodwill, for Buckley, is a central truth of the time period covered
in the essay. And he discovered that truth through rewriting the essay
time and again.
"I was looking for
the spiritual and literal truth insofar as I know it or could discover
it through the process of revision," he says.
Revision was central
to his ability to represent the feeling of goodwill. "I wrote 15-20 drafts
before it was done," he says, adding that this is his usual practice with
essays. While revising, he says, "the main thing that happened for me
was seeing the connections between the scenes and images and incidents.
I worked at cutting out extraneous detail and scenes and adding in data
that I recalled while working in that 'zone' that was the meditation/writing/rewriting
of the piece."
Before revision,
though, Buckley says working in the writing "zone" involved allowing a
first draft to "hit the computer with as rapid an unedited stream-of-consciousness
spray of sentences and/or lines as I could."
In writing "Work-Ups,"
Buckley also was "looking to find the rhythm of a voice." As in his poetry,
he says, he wanted this essay to have "music" and "imagery." The essay
began with a "poetic impulse-for some time I had wanted to write a poem
that made use of the rich storehouse of baseball names. At the level of
language and rhythm, I wanted the fun of just saying, 'Red Schoendienst,
Enos Slaughter, Cookie Lavagetto.'"
The images and events
from the 1950s that Buckley needed to write the essay came to him only
when he went back to their source, actually visiting his old grade-school
in Santa Barbara. He parked his car, walked over to the ball field, closed
his eyes, and spent some time in that meditative "zone," remembering his
school days.
Then he returned
to his journals from that time. In his journals, Buckley says, "There
were all those names waiting to be used." There was also a record of the
events of that period. "But more than the overview of the years, I saw
that what was most important was the simple goodwill, the friendship that
was a part of our days-and that the names that were most important were
those of my schoolmates from those days."

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