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Is the process
by which you prepare to write poetry different from the one you use to
write nonfiction?
Yes. I think they
come from really dramatically different parts of the brain. I imagine
differently. I think my sense of rhythm and language is different [when
writing one or the other].
Poems are more sculpted
on the page; there is some of that in prose, but there are certain formal
pressures in poetry that you forego in writing prose.
Where do we see
the "poet" in your creative nonfiction?
Many of the techniques
I use in poetry, I use in prose. Rhythm is very important to me. Images
are very important to me. I always try to write prose that has a rhythmical
quality to it. I see a paragraph almost as a musical composition. I would
like to see it come to a conclusion, to be complete and whole. I try to
write paragraphs that have a kind of poetic resolution. Actually, an entire
essay is like a musical composition. There should be a totality to it,
almost a kind of poetical lift.
Nonfiction writers
often see conveying information as the most important part of writing.
There are lots of nonfiction books that deliver information that is valuable
today, but whether or not a reader will want to pick it up in ten years
depends, I think, on if that particular book has a poetic lift.
In your essay,
"I Give Up Smiling," you intertwined your experiences in China with those
in your hometown of Des Moines. By doing so, you work to make the familiar
foreign and even quite frightening--and the foreign at least understandable,
if not exactly familiar.
I like writers who
try to seek authentic things, things they know about, so they can get
to things that they don't know and that's what I tried to do in "I Give
Up Smiling." This theme is picked up in the book's title, which is, "The
Stranger's Neighborhood."
Could you tell
us a little more about the process of writing "I Give Up Smiling"?
I originally conceived
the essay as part of a larger work that was going to be about China. It
took me a long time to give myself permission to write about it. I realized
that the book couldn't be simply about China. There are plenty of books
about China, many of them quite good. What would make this particular
subject interesting, then, is the sensibility I have to lend it.
This particular essay
comes early in the book, so a lot of local color has already been established.
The longer I wrote the book, however, the more the issues of home took
over. I wanted, then, to [start to] turn the focus to Des Moines. I decided
to use excerpts from my journals to continue the theme of China [while
exploring correlative issues from my boyhood home].
So the travel
you depict could be said to be equally interior as exterior?
I'd rather call this
essay, and the book that this is going to appear in, an example of "travel
experience" writing, rather than just "travel writing."
What do you see
as different in terms of the responsibilities of the creative nonfiction
writer as opposed to the responsibilities of the poet?
Part of the responsibility
of writing autobiographical pieces is that you will see your experience
as symbolic--symbolic for many other people. Your experience is important
not because it happened to you, but because it has significance for other
people. You can write about your life, but it can't be because it's about
your life. Writing creative nonfiction is about a fascination with the
self, but not necessarily with yourself.
You can see this
involvement with others or with "the self of others" in your essay. I
was most interested in the character of Wendell, for example, and what
he represented in the text.
He was a malignant
presence whose motives, at the time, were completely inscrutable. Now
I can look at it as an adult--understand that he was most certainly abused,
and came from a dysfunctional family, but at the time all I could think
about was getting away from him.
So Wendell was
a real person?
Oh, yes. In my work I change almost all names--you gotta respect the privacy
of all people--but I try to keep it factually true in all ways. I'm interested
in presenting what happens when x does this kind of thing to y--the real
names are not significant to the greater truth.
Do you feel compelled
to keep to the "greater truth" in poetry then?
No, because you are
not professing [the work is one of] fact, although I think readers of
poetry are still sometimes disappointed when they realize the narrative
told in a poem is not true. For example, the poet Stephen Dunn wrote a
poem called "The Substitute," in his book, "Local Time," in which the
speaker's daughter goes to school and pretends that she is English. Everyone
in the class gets a charge about it, yet the next day, the substitute
comes back, and the girl is forced to carry on with this identity. She
has to give a report about her family's life in England, the works. The
poem is about being saddled with the creation of an identity. You've re-created
yourself, but now you have to live with it. Dunn got the idea from an
experience his own daughter had, but in reality, the regular teacher came
back the next day. There wasn't any penalty to what the little girl had
done. Yet what he was interested in was not the actual experience. He
realized he had a narrative frame which was symbolic, and changed the
facts at will. His daughter was disappointed and tried to point out the
discrepancy with the truth, but he just kind of shrugged and said, as
poets will, "It's a poem." It's imagination, and any transformation necessary
to make it into art is justifiable. Life is not art. You die absurdly,
things don't make any sense. If you do have those moments of harmonic
convergence and shapeliness and wholeness, the next day you wake up and
it's absurd again.
How does the creative
nonfiction writer, then, create "art" out of a reality you argue is inherently
"artless"? What kind of techniques do you use to render "shapeliness"
and "wholeness" to experience?
It depends on the
subject I'm doing. It's the difference between a photograph and a painting.
I play with time, for instance. I don't believe in writing "this happened,
then this happened, then this happened." The book I'm working on right
now is about young homeless people. I see the events as a chain of spotlights,
and each of these spotlights will hover around a particular event. Chronological
time is not what is important. What I'm doing is creating a book that
is full of reporting of human experience, yet I see it not so much as
reporting as it is creating a portrait.
So you manipulate
time in your piece. Do you manipulate characters as well? Do you believe
in making compilation characters, or in creating characters from scratch?
I don't think I would
make one up, but then, I could say this today and make a liar of myself
tomorrow [laughs]. There is a possibility of using some compilation characters,
though. If something important happens to a character, but then he is
gone off somewhere...
...and you need him
in there...
It's a book of observation and surmise. It's not objective. I'm not objective.
You can throw objectivity out the window.
Where do you fit,
then, in this book you're writing?
At one level, I had
to put myself in there. It's fruitless to me to pretend not to be involved
with these people. It allows me to use other experience that is outside
the immediate arena in the book. I think it might be helpful in getting
more perspective, the kind of perspective a narrator can provide. I love
books which are rich and have lots of perception.
Which nonfiction
.... qualities?
Moritz Thomsen--he
wrote three books--"The Farm on the River of Emeralds," the?and
another one I haven't read yet. I love Annie Dillard's "The Pilgrim on
Tinker Creek."
And what poets
do you admire?
Contemporary poets? Stephen Dunn, Anthony Hecht. Adrienne Rich. I consider
Adrienne Rich the major American poet of our era. James Dickey before
1970.
What can nonfiction
writers do to learn from poets?
Read as much poetry
as you can. Seeing how perceptions are shaped by the poem will improve
your prose. I learned a lot about writing prose from writing poetry for
20 years. The discipline and intent of poetry, as well as the demand for
economy of language, keep phrases snug, and imbue the text with layers
of figurative language. These are attributes that would benefit any writer,
regardless of the genre he or she is writing in.

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