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What pleases you
most about the way your essay turned out? Are there ways in which you
feel it fell short of your original goal?
I'm particularly
satisfied with the formal coherence of my essay, and its economy of means.
From my standpoint, it has a distinct trajectory, reaching across several
unpredictable territories and finding an unexpected landing with an open-endedness
that I enjoy. Also, there's no excess; every bit of what's there feels
necessary to me. In that sense, it's a more spare prose than much of what
I write.
How did your essay
develop, both in your initial thinking about it and in the revision process?
What happened in the writing of it that you didn't expect would happen?
This essay/story
is autobiographical, and exact in all its facts. It was written in something
very close to a garret - a small room in a pension in Amsterdam, a fourth
floor walk up, under the eaves of the house, with a sloping outer wall
- on my laptop, an antique Tandy 102 with 32 pages worth of total memory.
I'd managed to piggyback a few days' stay in Amsterdam onto the festival
in Breda that is the story's concluding locale. My intuition, to which
I try to pay close attention, told me that if I gave up an evening's strolling
around to sit at the room's tiny desk and set this narrative down, I wouldn't
regret it.
I had no idea what
would come out - the experience on which the story is based (at least
its concluding episode) was only days old, I assumed undigested. So I
had no expectations, just curiosity. It came out pretty much complete
in the first draft, though not exactly in the final order. It felt like
writing several stories at once: the imagined genesis of the image, its
history in my hands, its disappearance, a paragraph of one, a sentence
of another. I just switched from mode to mode as they came, then cut and
pasted the chunks where they belonged when it felt the tale had been told.
Few revisions were needed, just a bit of fine tuning, a connective sentence
here, a different word there. Not for months did I recognize that it owes
a structural debt (and, perhaps, an echo of tone) to a wonderful story
by Spencer Holst, "On Hope," that I often use in my seminars and workshops.
So I've dedicated it to him.
How does your
experience writing in creative nonfiction depend upon or depart from your
work in other genres (poetry, fiction, playwriting, literary criticism)?
My living is made
writing about photography, as a journalist, critic, historian, and theoretician
of lens imagery. I've come back in recent years to writing poetry and
fiction, which I'd left aside for several decades. I consider the writing
I do professionally to have a significant creative component, not only
in the use of language but also in structure, tone, levels of discourse,
creation of a narrator's voice, etc. However, when you're writing about
something outside yourself that other people will also experience, an
objective correlative of your subject, your credibility depends to some
extent on its grounding in an accurate description of that subject. Some
link to the verifiable, the factual, is inherent in the situation: writer
and reader responding to something they can point to and check themselves
against. In that situation, I feel a deep obligation to what we might
call the facts of the case; I can't inaccurately describe a photograph,
or a body of work, to suit my fancy or strengthen my point. In the case
of this story, I felt no such obligation; had it been necessary, I think
I'd cheerfully have taken away or added anything from the actual events
on which it's based to make it come out right. Fortunately, it needed
no such alteration.
Speculate about
creative nonfiction as an emerging genre in American literature? Where
do you see it going in the next several years, or even further down the
line?
I don't think of
creative nonfiction as an "emerging genre." I think St. Augustine and
St. Theresa and Swift and Boswell and Ben Franklin and Virginia Woolf
and Thurber and Perelman and Terry Southern and Kay Boyle and Mailer and
hundreds and hundreds of others have been writing it for centuries. And
people used to study such writing, not only for its content but as literature;
the educated 19th century person could discuss Voltaire and Montaigne
and Marcus Aurelius and other nonfiction prose stylists along with Blake
and Milton. That departments of literature stopped teaching those texts
some decades ago, and that departments of creative writing (really a post-Korean
War phenomenon) disregarded the genre until recently, never stopped anyone
from working within it whenever the mood struck, and a few university
faculties "discovering" it doesn't confer any useful legitimacy on it,
except insofar as it persuades students to take it seriously. More interesting
by far as a subject of discourse would be those decades of bias against
it really, I think, a bias against those of us who actually write for
a living, since so many of those who do write "creative nonfiction" on
a daily basis, and a bias against the wide general audience that such
writing often finds. But that's another discussion.
What are the specific
literary techniques you attempt to use as a creative nonfiction writer?
Scenes? Dialogue? Specific detail, etc.?
As you can see, I
employ a goodly amount of specific detail; I want my reader to feel grounded,
in contact with whatever I'm describing, and detail is essential for that.
In other pieces I've used more dialogue; I feel I've an ear for telling,
revelatory (even if unconsciously so) phrases, though I can't construct
plausible fictional dialogue to save my life. If I ever do write a novel,
it'll either have a minimum of dialogue or use things I can remember people
actually saying.
What advice do
you offer young people interested in writing?
My two bits of advice
for aspiring writers of any age:
(1) never, ever, sell your copyright to anything, because
(2) you can sell/publish the same piece of writing more than once. Had
anyone in the Creative Writing Dept. at San Francisco State College said
those twenty words to me when I was taking a graduate degree there, I'd
have been spared much difficulty.

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