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What pleases you
most about the way your essay turned out? Are there any ways in which
it fell short of your original goals?
The idea for the
Buddy Bolden essay was to capture something of the place of Bolden in
New Orleans culture and mythology, and to insist on the validity of native
perspective with respect to that culture. Of the essays I've written,
I'm especially pleased with this one, at least in part because my own
goal was clear. Also, I'm satisfied that I was able to create a kind of
New Orleans sound and feel for the piece. There is nothing about this
piece that I would care to change.
How did your essay
develop, both in your initial thinking about it and in the revision process?
What happened in writing that you didnít expect would happen?
This is one in a
series of essays treating similar themes. In this series, I try to give
a sense of what it means to be a New Orleanian. One of the main components
of the native identity has perhaps more to do with how we hear ourselves
rather than how we see ourselves. I wanted to write a piece that got at
the heart of that sound by addressing the problem of what can never be
heard--in this instance, the ever absent sound of Bolden's silver horn.
I wanted to write not about silence, but about the eternal absence of
a sound we all know (or believe we know), and to say something about the
extent to which we are ěmarkedî by that sound and its absence. I did a
great deal of research in order to write this piece and came away quite
happy at finding very little to work with because, again this--to my mind--pointed
to the theme of absence. Not because nothing has been written on Bolden
but because the material presented as factual does not manage to say anything
about Bolden that we (natives) really need to know. I read numerous volumes
on New Orleans music and musicians, listened to early jazz recordings,
compiled lists and charts of bands and orchestras, and carried this topic
about with me no matter what other projects I began and completed during
the months I worked on the Bolden piece.
I did not revise.
My plan for this piece was already clear in my mind before I began writing.
And while it took many months to complete I never changed anything in
the structure or shape of the piece. I worked from different sets of outlines
and notes and progressed (slowly) straight through from beginning to end.
What I least expected
was publication. After all Iíd put into this piece, my greatest concern
was that it reeked too much of New Orleans to prove interesting to anyone
outside of New Orleans. It is the one piece I thought would never fmd
a home.
If you write in
other genres (poetry, fiction, playwriting, literary criticism, etc.)
how does your experience writing in creative nonfiction depend upon or
depart from your other kinds of writing?
I came to this genre
from poetry. For the past 18 years, Iíve worked and published as a poet.
I'd always planned to write essays and made notes for 10 to 12 years for
prose pieces I thought could work. Ten years ago, while a fellow at the
Fine Arts Work Center at Provincetown, I began a group of three essays.
The first of these was published in American Voice in 1995. Friends, and
even my agent, had tried to impress upon me that the word "essay" was
death incarnate for anyone who expected to be taken seriously as a writer.
The essay, they explained, was associated with literary history, with
the past. I'd begun to write articles of various kinds, and I knew that
was not what I wanted to count as serious writing. In fact, I began writing
articles for a local monthly simply to establish in my own mind that I
could write prose, that I had not forgotten how to write sentences. And
I sense that mine is a poetís prose. My prose is akin to my way of speaking;
it is perhaps an exaggerated version of my speaking and thinking style--long
sentences, parenthetical examples, longish asides, etc.
Also, the subjects
I choose to treat tend to be the same across genres. I am obsessed with
history and the past; religious/spiritual practices and traditions; the
evils of tourism and the diffictilties of belonging to a place beseiged
by and dependent upon a "tourism industry;" the relations of music, dance,
food, celebration, death; language and languages (I collect dictionaries
of all kinds) and by the codes we create within languages and the means
we use to substitute for spoken word. I have a fascination with the old,
the elderly and all things old and used and an impatience with youth and
newness. And I am pursued by the topic of New Orleans and the native inheritance.
What are the specific
literary techniques you attempt to use as a creative nonfiction writer?
For example, do you attempt to write in scenes? Do you employ dialogue?
Specificity of detail? How and why?
I am most concerned
with voice, and try to create multiple narrative voice within a single
work. This may involve a switch from my own straight voice to that of
a nameless character who functions as a trustworthy observer (as in the
Buddy Bolden piece where a witness to Bolden's day of madness describes
what he saw when Bolden broke away from the band). Because mythologies
are important to my work, I often favor a kind of mythic voice typified
by elevated language, broad strokes.
I do try to create
and fill in brief scenes or skits so that the reader can witness the story
as it occurs. I try to provide available detail such as biographical or
historical data but am as likely to present such information for the purpose
of debunking it. One of my concems as a writer is how we know what we
know and who says so.
What advice might
you offer young people interested in writing?
Since I've never
worked with young people, the only advice I can offer is probably fairly
standard. I've never believed in the romance of writing, or in any such
thing as inspiration--only work and more work. Writing is a process of
study, examination, experimentation. And keeping a journal or working
notebook is a good way to begin thinking through projects. Years of dedicated
reading, study and research is the best beginning I know. Having a good
writing mentor early on is a big plus.

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