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Megan Foss comments on Lee Gutkind's editorial,
"The Truth and Consequences of Creative Nonfiction, in Issue 9

Megan Foss Author of Love Letters
Your introduction to Issue 9 struck a particular note with me and I thought you might be interested in this.

My family comes from a little town called Concrete in Washington state.  Last year I taught creative nonfiction to two different English classes on a volunteer basis. Essentially I was just trying to introduce them to the personal essay. Prior to beginning, the teacher told me that for the most part they were students who would never go anywhere.  It was a welfare town and basically they were losers.  Concrete is right at the base of the Cascade Mountains and is one of those places that has been devastated by restrictions on logging old growth forests.  People moved away and rented their houses out cheaply and so a large part of the population is on welfare.  What was particularly intersting about all this is that it happens to be the place and high school Tobias Wolff wrote about in This Boy's Life.  And since the movie was filmed there I knew they would all be at least familiar with the fact that book existed and I thought it would be a great way to show them how the small stories of their lives could have mass appeal, that they were interesting.  And I got the shock of my life.  They hated Wolff and they hated his book.  They felt that he hung them with a reputation and a stereotypical identity that nothing could shake.

And they were very right. Throughout the rest of the county they're known as idiot hickabillies who will never amount to anything.  Now I realize that it amounts to sacrilege to criticize Wolff or that book, but I went back and reread it and found myself enormously conflicted over the issue.  As a writer, I believe in Wolff's right to tell that story anyway he chooses.  But it seems like communities are almost always written about by outsiders and I seriously question how much ethnographic responsibility memoirists have.  There's not a decent human being in that entire book.   In fact he writes it as such a horrible community and place (although he wraps the majority of that up in his stepfather -- it is an entire community he's writing about) that we applaud him when he cheats his way out.

Here at Iowa people ask me where I'm from, and actually prior to coming here I lived the last 10 years in that county and the last two in the Concrete area and anytime I say that, people always ask me if it's as bad as Wolff says.  And it's not.  It's nothing like that.  My father and his five brothers and sisters went to Concrete High and were all successful human beings.

But it was interesting.  Once my students began deconstructing the stereotypes he'd created in his book, it acted as a springboard for deconstructing the ones they believed in and youngsters who began the quarter using words like spic and nigger were reading Richard Wright and
Zora Neale Hurston.  In fact, at the end of the quarter a bunch of them took the day off to come and watch me teach "The Revolutionary Tradition in African American Literature" at Western Washington University.

So I thought all that was interesting in the context of what you wrote in this issue of Creative Nonfiction.  I guess for me personally it comes down to what you label it.  I would have no problem with Wolff's book as a novel.  But I wonder if we should be calling memoir nonfiction.  I wonder if they're not two different genres.  At least in the case of Wolff I wonder that. I've been playing around with an essay on the whole thing that I've titled "Concrete Facts." It is an intriguing issue.  I know that in my writing it has been paramount to present the community that I was a part of in the most honest light possible.  And now when I write about it, I am the outsider and I do find myself questioning more and more, how much is personal perception and how much is "truth."